使用者討論:JINJINYAN
HE ZIXUAN[編輯]
I read your two articles. The good points are: the translation is good, it is easy to understand, and it provides enough background information and details to enable readers to fully understand the topic. However, the structure of some of your sentences is relatively complex, which affects the reading fluency.--ZixuanHE（留言） 2024年6月10日 (一) 03:32 (UTC)